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@ 2001-12-27 23:27:00
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Prologue (6/8/08 WC 296)


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How I Came to Write This Book


This story is written as fiction, but there's some essential background the reader should know.

I teach high school English in Podunksville, Iowa. (More about that fascinating place later....) This past May, I challenged the handful of English III students who were going on into my senior Creative Writing Seminar to journal during the summer.

Oh, I was SOOO righteous! "My life is no more busy than yours. Write in your journals all summer long, and I'll write in mine. Every day. The first day we're back in the fall, you all already know what the cliched English assignment will be..."

A chorus of laughing and groaning student voices did a sing-song chant reminiscent of hundreds of grade school teachers, "What I Did on My Summer Vacation!"

"How I Spent My Summer Vacation!"

"My Summer Vacation."

"Let's turn it into a contest," enthused Aaron, a tall, string-bean of a sixteen year old boy with a rapier-sharp wit and a keen sense of competition. "The winner of the essay contest can be selected by the entire class. I'll even make the winner a cake with my own two little hands."

Jerry catcalled, "I'd rather have MINE made with flour, eggs, and water..."

I readily agreed. I promised to follow the "one head, one vote" rule scrupulously and to abide by their decisions.

But, as it turned out, an essay just didn't cut it in my case. The BOOK has about 400 pages, uncut...

To read more about Podunksville and the fascinating area that created these beautiful children with such a joye de vivire,all one has to do is simply not skip the Preface!


-- penned August 13, the last Monday before school started this year.


Despina MacKenzie


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Last updated 6/8/08 - dropped “about” in first line; 3/9/02.

Word Count: 296


http://pandemo.livejournal.com/22881.html
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Tuesday, September 4th, 2001 6:52 am (pandemo)



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Aaron on eating
(Anonymous)
2001-12-28 08:28 am UTC (link)
I suggest dropping the paragraph:

Aaron also loves to eat. You probably guessed that when you heard sixteen and boy said in the same breath.

--Sue Snowbird

(Originally posted on pandemo 11/22/01.)

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Re: Aaron on eating
[info]summercircles
2001-12-28 08:33 am UTC (link)
I dropped the line. The piece does have more punch without it.

Deleting any of my beautiful words is painful, but I am so verbose it is essential! I have to learn this skill!

Thanks for the comment.

--Despina

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With Alacrity
(Anonymous)
2001-12-28 08:59 am UTC (link)
What does that mean?

--college degree

(Originally posted on Pandemo 11/7/01.)

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Re: With Alacrity
[info]summercircles
2001-12-28 09:12 am UTC (link)
I have substituted I readily agreed for I agreed with alacrity

Being a teacher at heart, I do not intend to leave my youthful audience in the dust. I am probably over-educated, and know I have a huge vocabulary. I just never thought of alacrity as an upper level word.

Thanks for the heads up!

--Despina

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With Alacrity
(Anonymous)
2001-12-28 09:09 am UTC (link)
I agree with "college degree". I am more comfortable with I readily agree.

--Some College

(Originally submitted 12/16/01)

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With Alacrity
[info]summercircles
2001-12-28 09:15 am UTC (link)
I evidently really like the phrase with alacrity.

I just found it again in Range War III, surrounded by plenty of context clues to aid understanding. I am enough of a teacher to improve my charges' vocabulary painlessly when the opportunity presents itself! LOL

--Despina

(Originally posted on Pandemo 11/18/01)

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